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This is a good start, however I would recommend some things to help improve your world building skills.

Firstly, I would recommend that you blend the rock texture into the grass texture a bit more because at the moment, the transition is quite hard which would take away from realism. (blend the textures)

Secondly, I would also recommend putting more detail into the rock texturing itself, adding small gaps and cracks aswell as possibly vertex shading would greatly improve the zone in my opinion

Thirdly, I would suggest that you add another grass texture as a highlight.

also in the top right there is a green texture that looks out of place, possibly trying to find replacement textures that better suit the environment.

Finally, the area looks a bit crowded, perhaps making the area a bit larger would makes things look slightly nicer. 

I'll leave a link below to a very useful tutorial series by Amaroth which covers the things I've stated in detail to help you get a better understanding of world building.

19 hours ago, Alrineer said:

This is a good start, however I would recommend some things to help improve your world building skills.

Firstly, I would recommend that you blend the rock texture into the grass texture a bit more because at the moment, the transition is quite hard which would take away from realism. (blend the textures)

Secondly, I would also recommend putting more detail into the rock texturing itself, adding small gaps and cracks aswell as possibly vertex shading would greatly improve the zone in my opinion

Thirdly, I would suggest that you add another grass texture as a highlight.

also in the top right there is a green texture that looks out of place, possibly trying to find replacement textures that better suit the environment.

Finally, the area looks a bit crowded, perhaps making the area a bit larger would makes things look slightly nicer. 

I'll leave a link below to a very useful tutorial series by Amaroth which covers the things I've stated in detail to help you get a better understanding of world building.

 

Hey Thanks for your review, I'll keep t his in mind and try to improve my building skills as this was my first attempt into noggit and I was just playing a little with teverything I found in wow model viiewer.

Thanks alot for the review!

Just wanted to add that if this is your very first attempt to do something in Noggit, its very good, I'd say way better than my was:P.

Btw, updated series Alrineer kindly posted here, it has way more parts on YouTube already and I haven't updated it here for quite some time.